江苏卷：试题回放

江苏卷

　　【试题回放】

　　2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

　　教育部倡导学生：

　　●每天锻炼一小时

　　●健康工作五十年

　　●幸福生活一辈子

　　请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

　　注意：

　　1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥；

　　2.词数：120词左右(发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数)；

　　3.参考词汇：阳光体育活动 ——a national student sports program;

　　教育部——the Ministry of Education。

　　Good afternoon, everyone,

　　Thank you!
【满分范文】

　　满分文(一)

　　Good afternoon, everyone,

　　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00am~11:00am on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

　　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

　　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

　　Thank you!

　　名师点评：

　　本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

　　积累卡片

　　好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

　　好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

　　教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

　　好处：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

　　2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records.

　　如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

　　好处：虚拟语气。
满分文(二)

　　Good afternoon, everyone,

　　Its my honor to be here to give you a speech. On April 29，2007 the national student sports program was held from 10∶00am~11∶00am in many primary and middle schools all over China. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program. In Jiangsu, about 11 milloin students took part in the activity.

　　The theme of this program is “do exercises for one hour per day, work for 50 years healthily and lead a happy life”. In my viewpoint, this is quite good for us senior students. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future. That will be very good. So boys and girls，come and join us now!

　　Thank you!

　　名师点评：

　　文章的结构很清楚，内容和要点把握得也比较完整。本文十分符合演讲稿的要求，写得比较出色。第一段中用了强调句，指出了发起项目的主体。作者用并列的方式解释了主题，十分出色。定语从句也用的很好、很到位。

　　积累卡片

　　好词1. promote v.促进2. foundation n.基础3. gain v.获得

　　好句1. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program.

　　是教育部推动了这个计划。

　　好处：强调句的使用十分准确。

　　2. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future.

　　每天锻炼一小时我们的身体就会很健康，而这也为将来打下了坚实的基础。

　　好处：lay a solid foundation，为…打下坚实基础。

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