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　　据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

　　假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容应包括：

　　1.自我简介；

　　2.得知的情况；

　　3.表示鼓励；

　　4.打算为她做什么；

　　5.祝她早日康复。

　　注意：

　　1.信的格式已为你写好；

　　2.信中不得出现你的真实情况；

　　3.词数100左右；

　　4.请在答题卡上做答。

　　Dear Amy,

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

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　　满分文(一)

　　Dear Amy,

　　Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　名师点评：

　　本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

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　　好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

　　好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.

　　我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

　　好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

　　2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!

　　因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧！

　　好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

满分文(二)

　　Dear Amy,

　　My name is Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School in China. I have got to know that you got lung cancer and are in great pain. Sorry to hear that. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate. For every letter, they give three cents. So I will try as hard as possible to persuade my friends to write to you so as to help you get enough money to cure the disease. Im sure you will be OK soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　名师点评：

　　文章整体来说一气呵成，衔接自然。通过诸如原因状语从句的使用，使得文章内容饱满，过渡自然，较好地使用了诸如but，so之类的连词。文章使用了“the +比较级，the +比较级”的句式，十分出彩。

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　　好词1. cure v.治愈2. association n.协会3.donate v.捐赠

　　好句1. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it.

　　但是因为你还比较年轻，疾病不会很严重，你能够战胜它。

　　好处：since，引导原因状语从句。

　　2. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate.

　　据说你收到的信越多，美国抗癌组织捐给你的钱就越多。

　　好处：the +比较级，表示强调。